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A Quick and Easy Punctuation Guide - The Comma


USE THE COMMA  ( , )

   To separate items in a series.
 - (series of words) – Catholics, Protestants, Jews, and Muslims were all represented.
 - (series of phrases) – She kissed him on the nose, on both eyes, and on the left ear.
 - (series of clauses) – They came to the party, they bothered everyone, and they refused to leave.
     *Special note: Some style guides and instructors will suggest leaving out the last comma in a series: Catholics, Protestants, Jews and Muslims were all represented.


   To set off all types of nonrestrictive elements (where the information is not necessary to the meaning of the core sentence).
 - Boston, the site of the famous Tea Party, is a very old city.
 - The stream, once swift and clear, is now dry.
 - John, who knows everything about physics, can’t change a spark plug.
     *Special note:  Do not put commas around essential (restrictive) information:  The woman who is sitting four seats to the left is stealing donuts. [The location of the woman is essential information].

   To set off introductory elements.
 - When you get out of school, come over to my house.
 - Feeling tired and defeated, the Senator curled up with his teddy bear.
 - In the back of the house, you will find all you need to know about the crime.


   Before a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) when used to connect main clauses.
 - We visit them during Christmas vacation, and they visit us every summer.
 - The batter swung at the ball three times, but he never came close.
     *Special note:  Do not use a comma if your coordinating conjunction connects a main clause and a dependant clause: The batter swung at the ball three times but never came close.

   To connect free modifiers to a base sentence.
 - The jockeys sat bowed and relaxed, moving a little at the waist with the movement of their horses.
 - A few hours later we caught two small dolphins, startlingly beautiful fish of pure gold, pulsing and fading and changing color.

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